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The Neckbrace of Evil

Member since 2002 · Posted 4 Aug 2003 · Edited 4 Aug 2003 · 4 comments

_O/ '|_ _(o)\_ + A kilo of cocaine and millions of dollars in settlement money can turn... -==O __<|~|\___ \_(0)_(0)_\ In the blink of an eye. Your luck can change, but the past is always a review-mirror away from you looking onto better ways for you too break your neck.

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[9] http://mulberryfairy 4-Aug-03/6:25 PM Reply
I think you should put a space between "on" and "to"
and change "too" to "to" in the last line.
What was the first "picture"? A wheelchair? The second a person in a car?
[n/a] Bachus › http://mulberryfairy 14-Aug-03/8:31 PM Reply
No, no, no and nope, but you were very very close.
[7] scitz 5-Aug-03/7:01 AM Reply
Cool
[2] Edna Sweetlove 5-Aug-08/8:35 AM Reply
I like many things about this. The full stop at the end was my favourite.