Poemranker [Poem: The Neckbrace of Evil] [by Bachus] Thu Nov 21 04:24:08 PST 2024

The Neckbrace of Evil (Other) by Bachus

_O/ '|_ _(o)\_ + A kilo of cocaine and millions of dollars in settlement money can turn... -==O __<|~|\___ \_(0)_(0)_\ In the blink of an eye. Your luck can change, but the past is always a review-mirror away from you looking onto better ways for you too break your neck.

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Up the ladder: Cupid promised me, Nadine

Down the ladder: falling in with the wrong crowd.

Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)

	Votes
10	6	3
9	2	0
8	1	0
7	3	0
6	0	0
5	0	0
4	0	0
3	0	0
2	1	2
1	0	0
0	1	1

Arithmetic Mean: 7.15
Weighted score: 7.048034
Overall Rank: 30

Posted: August 4, 2003 4:13 PM PDT; Last modified: August 4, 2003 4:27 PM PDT
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Comments:

[9] http://mulberryfairy @ 216.195.145.66 | 4-Aug-03/6:25 PM | Reply

I think you should put a space between "on" and "to"
and change "too" to "to" in the last line.
What was the first "picture"? A wheelchair? The second a person in a car?

[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 > http://mulberryfairy | 14-Aug-03/8:31 PM | Reply

No, no, no and nope, but you were very very close.

[7] scitz @ 62.105.119.105 | 5-Aug-03/7:01 AM | Reply

Cool

[2] Edna Sweetlove @ 85.211.243.48 | 5-Aug-08/8:35 AM | Reply

I like many things about this. The full stop at the end was my favourite.

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