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The Neckbrace of Evil (Other) by Bachus

_O/ '|_ _(o)\_ + A kilo of cocaine and millions of dollars in settlement money can turn... -==O __<|~|\___ \_(0)_(0)_\ In the blink of an eye. Your luck can change, but the past is always a review-mirror away from you looking onto better ways for you too break your neck.

http://mulberryfairy 4-Aug-03/6:25 PM
I think you should put a space between "on" and "to"
and change "too" to "to" in the last line.
What was the first "picture"? A wheelchair? The second a person in a car?




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