Comments byBill Z Bub, 321–340 back, including replies. Only comments on poems

replying on The lightest touch by INTRANSIT 9 Mar 2003, 7:03 AM
I didn't give you a seven. I forgot to vote! In fact, I wasn't sure what this one was about. Hints?
replying on this old man (edit) by Bill Z Bub 9 Mar 2003, 7:02 AM
Beefs? Uh, okay, at what e-mail address?
on Tomb by GekoHawaii 8 Mar 2003, 9:08 PM
blork
on dreams by babygurl420 8 Mar 2003, 9:07 PM
Whoa, slow down and try some line breaks. Then get back to us. Don't call you, we'll call us.
on Waiting to exit by INTRANSIT 8 Mar 2003, 9:01 PM
okay, now I need time for some digestion! sounds good to me so far. I like this one, it has a familiar cast to it somehow... hmm.
on Best Present Ever by razorgrin 8 Mar 2003, 8:55 PM
you have a plush cthulhu too?
what are the odds?

that is not dead which can eternal lie
and with strange aeons, even death may die.

-bill, a fun guy from yuggoth
oh yeah. I like Druids myself. Lets all meet in a Tavern, buy mead for an sp, meet a crazy old man with a map
to some wicked caves where we'll find a 10'x10' room with an ORC GUARDING A CHEST! Good thing I brought my iron rations and ten foot pole!
Please can I have an AC bonus mr. DM?
getting better. this one has a bit o'snap. but it's still awfully familiar.

-bill z aka mr nice guy
and for my next trick, i shall jump this man-eating tiger-shark.
I know the feeling.
But you need something more.
Something more than a simple mapping of your current emotional state.
Something slightly more specific.

on Fireworks on the Island by horus8 8 Mar 2003, 8:35 PM
heeheehee.888
on this can be no more than shit by Crakyamuni 8 Mar 2003, 8:33 PM
art sucks when viewed?
okay dude.
you're screwed.
maybe you should be sued?
or go on Family Feud?
have you ever been booed?
No need to be so crude.

:))
on The lightest touch by INTRANSIT 8 Mar 2003, 8:31 PM
nice and smooth.
on leaving by elizabethann 8 Mar 2003, 8:29 PM
7 is the number of purity
on The Rift by Bachus 8 Mar 2003, 8:26 PM
scintillate
she did, and danced on the small floor by the DJ.
We had driven between cities, practiced numbers and lines,
but still I could only watch
and drink.
She was with my best friend,
anyway.
on Back In Time by stolenpurity 8 Mar 2003, 8:23 PM
Gaaaaaaaaaaaaah. you don't know!
i took it from them long time gone.
in a dingey classroom
they laughed.
later that night, on the wet sand by the beach
I found a discarded bra
among the cat-tails,
then went back to the brokendown car
to make out with her sister.
on War Begins on Tuesday by Nicholas Jones 8 Mar 2003, 8:17 PM
USA is AOK!
(please mr. police don't take me away)
THUMBS UP HIGHER, CITIZEN001067604032!
(oh god oh god remember its all in the name of freedom)
on Cussedness by Nicholas Jones 8 Mar 2003, 8:15 PM
Lennin was a mean bastard. I blame him. And Stalin.
the important question is:
why did the Reds all have such cool beards and/or moustachios?
on Fresh faced Danger-Teen by INTRANSIT 8 Mar 2003, 10:05 AM
Yep, this would make an excellent song. Good work, man! 999skiddoo!
I may lose my "cool", but I like
this poem. Yes sir, I like it
a bunch.
wunderbar! oktoberfest!
midnite madness!