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I cannot take this shit(please comment and critique) (Other) by TrulyUnique0642
You kiss me with your eyes shut tight,
But isn't that how you kissed the others?
I might just die from this pain in my heart.
If only there was reason to start to hate you,
I do, but really I don't.
You won't stop,
You won't quit,
How much longer must I deal with this shit?
Would you please stop calling?
No one's around, I need you.
So don't stop picking up that phone,
I need you alone.
Just keep me posted on who you're fuckin,
Because I might just want to hunt them down one day,
And see what they havn't that I don't.
I can't stop, I don't need you,
You're nothing - you're not worth it.
Although I need to cry,
My eyes are dry.
I cannot take this shit - I quit.
Let me be lonely if I must.
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Arithmetic Mean: 4.857143
Weighted score: 4.96158
Overall Rank: 8530
Posted: March 8, 2003 6:23 PM PST; Last modified: March 8, 2003 6:23 PM PST
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well actually here go off on rage it might help
Get bent
Eat Shit
Fuck off
Go rot