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I cannot take this shit(please comment and critique) (Other) by TrulyUnique0642

You kiss me with your eyes shut tight, But isn't that how you kissed the others? I might just die from this pain in my heart. If only there was reason to start to hate you, I do, but really I don't. You won't stop, You won't quit, How much longer must I deal with this shit? Would you please stop calling? No one's around, I need you. So don't stop picking up that phone, I need you alone. Just keep me posted on who you're fuckin, Because I might just want to hunt them down one day, And see what they havn't that I don't. I can't stop, I don't need you, You're nothing - you're not worth it. Although I need to cry, My eyes are dry. I cannot take this shit - I quit. Let me be lonely if I must.

Tintagiles 20-May-04/7:04 PM
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