poemranker ::leaving by elizabethann

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Free verse № 43036

leaving

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Mar 2003 · 3 comments

stayed up until three talking about boys and makeup. we were trying to make it last. we were all growing up so fast. missed the days of boy bands and summertime lemonade stands. stayed up until three trying not to leave childhood forcing ourselves to stay in that moment giggling over him and her using whispers for bad words didn't want to sleep didn't want to ever leave. stayed up until three our last night together remains with us forever.

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3 comments

[5] Crakyamuni 8-Mar-03/2:20 PM Reply
a nude pillow fight was in order! Next time due this while playing quarters..
[7] Bill Z Bub 8-Mar-03/8:29 PM Reply
7 is the number of purity
[2] Sasha 19-May-04/7:37 PM Reply
fine
does this rhyme?