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Shouldn't have said anything(please critique and comment) (Other) by TrulyUnique0642 We used to joke around,
It was all just a game,
Then I realized I had feelings for you,
And everything changed.
We used to talk,
And laugh at silly things,
Until I told you how I really felt,
Things can never be the same.
Now I'm lucky if I get a smile,
Or a "Hello" in the hall,
We don't ever talk anymore,
And you never call.
I guess I never should've told you,
Never said anything at all.
I should've kept it to myself,
And not said anything at all.
Up the ladder:
LIFE
Down the ladder:
A comment for Me (Aj) from a hottie
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Posted: March 8, 2003 6:19 PM PST; Last modified: March 8, 2003 6:19 PM PSTWeighted score: 4.6662316 Overall Rank: 12246 Comments:
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Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129
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8-Mar-03/7:31 PM
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Hey. Saying things is what allows us the freedom to acknowledge that we think. I mean. Would you rather have a person you care about shrouded in seemingly harmless dilusions? Or to know that they are enlightened. I'm happier just because some one made me realise that I don't have to hang around ppl to have friends. I'm thankful that I discovered this
Don't worry sweetie. They're just too good for you, is all. zitface.
wow razor...you sure know how to make ppl feel better. Maybe you should try to jump that tiger shark, I mean after all it is no match for your over inflated cranium and unrivaled ego.
after you've kicked the tarrasque in the groin, sharks are nothing.
and for my next trick, i shall jump this man-eating tiger-shark.
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