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Shouldn't have said anything(please critique and comment) (Other) by TrulyUnique0642
We used to joke around, It was all just a game, Then I realized I had feelings for you, And everything changed. We used to talk, And laugh at silly things, Until I told you how I really felt, Things can never be the same. Now I'm lucky if I get a smile, Or a "Hello" in the hall, We don't ever talk anymore, And you never call. I guess I never should've told you, Never said anything at all. I should've kept it to myself, And not said anything at all.

Up the ladder: LIFE

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.2
Weighted score: 4.6662316
Overall Rank: 12241
Posted: March 8, 2003 6:19 PM PST; Last modified: March 8, 2003 6:19 PM PST
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[4] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 | 8-Mar-03/7:31 PM | Reply
Hey. Saying things is what allows us the freedom to acknowledge that we think. I mean. Would you rather have a person you care about shrouded in seemingly harmless dilusions? Or to know that they are enlightened. I'm happier just because some one made me realise that I don't have to hang around ppl to have friends. I'm thankful that I discovered this
[0] razorgrin @ 198.164.188.66 | 8-Mar-03/7:35 PM | Reply
Don't worry sweetie. They're just too good for you, is all. zitface.
[4] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 > razorgrin | 9-Mar-03/9:17 AM | Reply
wow razor...you sure know how to make ppl feel better. Maybe you should try to jump that tiger shark, I mean after all it is no match for your over inflated cranium and unrivaled ego.
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.143.142 > Freethinker1602 | 10-Mar-03/6:48 AM | Reply
after you've kicked the tarrasque in the groin, sharks are nothing.
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 | 8-Mar-03/8:41 PM | Reply
and for my next trick, i shall jump this man-eating tiger-shark.
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