Shouldn't have said anything(please critique and comment)

Member since 2003 · Posted 8 Mar 2003 · 5 comments

We used to joke around, It was all just a game, Then I realized I had feelings for you, And everything changed. We used to talk, And laugh at silly things, Until I told you how I really felt, Things can never be the same. Now I'm lucky if I get a smile, Or a "Hello" in the hall, We don't ever talk anymore, And you never call. I guess I never should've told you, Never said anything at all. I should've kept it to myself, And not said anything at all.

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[4] Freethinker1602 8-Mar-03/7:31 PM Reply

Hey. Saying things is what allows us the freedom to acknowledge that we think. I mean. Would you rather have a person you care about shrouded in seemingly harmless dilusions? Or to know that they are enlightened. I'm happier just because some one made me realise that I don't have to hang around ppl to have friends. I'm thankful that I discovered this

[0] razorgrin 8-Mar-03/7:35 PM Reply

Don't worry sweetie. They're just too good for you, is all. zitface.

[4] Freethinker1602 › razorgrin 9-Mar-03/9:17 AM Reply

wow razor...you sure know how to make ppl feel better. Maybe you should try to jump that tiger shark, I mean after all it is no match for your over inflated cranium and unrivaled ego.

[0] razorgrin › Freethinker1602 10-Mar-03/6:48 AM Reply

after you've kicked the tarrasque in the groin, sharks are nothing.

[n/a] Bill Z Bub 8-Mar-03/8:41 PM Reply

and for my next trick, i shall jump this man-eating tiger-shark.