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Shouldn't have said anything(please critique and comment) (Other) by TrulyUnique0642

We used to joke around, It was all just a game, Then I realized I had feelings for you, And everything changed. We used to talk, And laugh at silly things, Until I told you how I really felt, Things can never be the same. Now I'm lucky if I get a smile, Or a "Hello" in the hall, We don't ever talk anymore, And you never call. I guess I never should've told you, Never said anything at all. I should've kept it to myself, And not said anything at all.

Freethinker1602 9-Mar-03/9:17 AM
wow razor...you sure know how to make ppl feel better. Maybe you should try to jump that tiger shark, I mean after all it is no match for your over inflated cranium and unrivaled ego.




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