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A comment for Me (Aj) from a hottie (Free verse) by ChunkyHunkyMonkey
I think i have found that person that i want to spend the rest of my life with... Aj babe i am talkin about you.... You are the reason i wake up in the morning you are the reason i am still alive to this day if i ever loose you i dont know what i would do... Babe i love you and always will till the day i die.. Know matter what happen's you are mine and i am yours now and forever... I love you... Hugg's and Kisses... MmmWwwAaa Some people say that their is only one true love for you but you know what i have had two loves and both of them are and where true loves... I am with the guy that was my sec... love and damn can i i want to be yours forever... Till i die and i am not just saying that A.J. Babe I love you and i hope you love me as much as i love you...I might not show that i love you but at least you know that i love you and from the day i met you i thought that i was going to be with you for the rest of my life... I hope you feel the same... kiss kiss Some people say that their is only one true love but you know what i have had more then one and i am with the 2nd person that i was and am in love with... I want to but with you Aj till the day i die i dont know what i would do if i would loose you... Or what i have done if i have never met you... Till the day i die Aj you are mine and always will be... . Now and forever... i love you Aj

Down the ladder: Whipped (With Preface)

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Posted: March 31, 2003 4:13 PM PST; Last modified: March 31, 2003 4:13 PM PST
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[n/a] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 1-Apr-03/5:47 AM | Reply
letterranker.com?
[n/a] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 1-Apr-03/5:48 AM | Reply
lol
[n/a] Christof @ 217.44.71.200 | 1-Apr-03/7:30 AM | Reply
You should write for Dawson's Creek
[1] Garrett S Sexton @ 213.122.117.88 | 1-Apr-03/1:39 PM | Reply
DIE THEN AT LEAST THEN,THEN IT SHALL BE OVER YOU IMMATURE PASSION FLOOZY THAT YET HAS EVRYTHING TO LEARN OF LOVE.

HERE MY DARLIN IS A HINT
no true love is one way, nor a compition,ROMANTIC LOVE is built up over time.
It is also a posistive,there is no love in being dead.

BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BORED NOW
[n/a] Freethinker1602 @ 68.48.88.129 | 21-Jul-03/4:35 PM | Reply
WEll you know what....you damn people that say others know nothing of what pain love can be...I say, SCREW YOU. I mean you don't have to be a certain age damn it. Certain things can happen. You can care for some one very deeply and then get hurt. So what you can love at any age. It is still love if a girl loves her daddy, so why is the affection between two individuals any different?
[n/a] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 21-Jul-03/7:55 PM | Reply
poop.
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