| Re: Fragmental by Bill Z Bub |
19-May-20/2:34 AM |
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5am. No sleep. Got lost in the innerwebs. Are the spiders all gone? The weavers migrated?
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| Re: a comment on I want you by nicole081083 |
27-Mar-09/7:22 AM |
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It's a title that anyone and everyone can identify with, n'est-ce pas?
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| Re: a comment on Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt by Bill Z Bub |
9-Mar-09/5:53 PM |
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I didn't pick one because its meant to imply a timeless moment. Thanks for the nine and the kind words.
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| Re: a comment on Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt by Bill Z Bub |
6-Mar-09/10:28 PM |
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I don't want to infringe on the privacy of others, and I just realized that my identity here is no longer a mystery. Thus the identity of the "you" in this pome would be rather easy to discover.
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| Re: Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt by Bill Z Bub |
6-Mar-09/6:09 AM |
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Deleted second half of this. Now it is incomplete, but then, it IS part one. The story isn't over, is never over until the two old ravens fly free and the the words become meaningless scratches in the clay of our existence.
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| Re: Going to Michigan for the weekend by <~> |
6-Mar-09/5:58 AM |
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| Re: Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt by Bill Z Bub |
6-Mar-09/5:41 AM |
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...aaaaand I now regret posting this. Ah my old friend regret. Never seem able to get rid of you.
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| Re: a comment on Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt by Bill Z Bub |
5-Mar-09/11:09 PM |
should say "in this poem or in any actual events inspiring it".
Not that there's anything wrong with that.
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| Re: a comment on Final Dates, part 1: through gates of smoke and salt by Bill Z Bub |
5-Mar-09/11:05 PM |
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see I told ya. I really wanted to get rid of the entire last stanza (not counting the final two lines), because it sounds a little out there... also I just realized I may have used language that seems to imply there was some kind of actual drinking of blood going on... I'd like to state for the record that there was no drinking of or intentional drawing of blood for the purpose of imbibing said substance in this poem. I think. So any vampirism implied is purely metaphorical.
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| Re: a comment on prove me wrong by nentwined |
5-Mar-09/10:34 PM |
ah the eternal struggle for being "in shape"... I've been losing weight lately, mainly due to a medically necessitated complete overhaul of my dietary regimen. And stress has started making me eat less, instead of what it used to do, make me eat more.
I should probably start going to this thing they call "gym".
Oh I posted the prose pome. Let me know what you think, I may not leave it up for long... we'll see.
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| Re: a comment on 2am and sober in the digital age by nentwined |
5-Mar-09/10:26 PM |
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ask and it shall be given unto you.
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| Re: 2am and sober in the digital age by nentwined |
5-Mar-09/10:25 PM |
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I have a feeling our email addy's will outlive us for longer that a moment. They may outlive the heat death of the universe.
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| Re: prove me wrong by nentwined |
5-Mar-09/10:01 PM |
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I sometimes fear this is too true, my friend.
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| Re: a comment on 9 Things to Eat for Breakfast & Why by A. Nomaly |
5-Mar-09/10:00 PM |
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I didn't mean to one up anything, I was just inspired by the thought of licorice and kisses... in fact it inspired a whole prose poem of some length that I'm still working on. I have't yet decided if I'm going to post it though, as its very personal.
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| Re: a comment on the only thing worse than living (revised, liberated) by Bill Z Bub |
5-Mar-09/9:57 PM |
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yeah that was just how I rolled, man.
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| Re: the end of the world, c'est soir by Bill Z Bub |
5-Mar-09/5:56 PM |
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this one is pure automatic. Hrm.
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| Re: a comment on The Project by malpaso |
3-Mar-09/10:04 AM |
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Ah you got me there. I read this every night before I go to sleep, and dream of sweet naked posts in jello.
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| Re: Graveyard(Cry of the Dead) by alvinb |
3-Mar-09/5:30 AM |
...yeah...no...
besides, why whould ghosts hang around boring old tombstone when there is a whole universe to explore?
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| Re: Ode to the Potato by jessicazee |
3-Mar-09/5:12 AM |
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The second stanza is fantastic, "so hopeful the morning of bacon"... indeed it is, indeed it is.
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| Re: for the slaves and the seekers by Bill Z Bub |
2-Mar-09/8:40 AM |
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Glad my delightful tragicomical farce amused you, Blindpoetry. Now, who's up for some flogging?
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