Poemranker [Poem: Graveyard(Cry of the Dead)] [by alvinb] Thu Apr 25 08:44:37 PDT 2024

Graveyard(Cry of the Dead) (Free verse) by alvinb

Why aren't you visiting? Don't you know my spirit is suffering? Why aren't you even trying? Don't you care that my spirit is crying? Come with me... Come with me... Let's go... Come here and stay with my tombstone... Even just for one afternoon... And after that pleasant time... Happiness will be mine...

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Up the ladder: Shatter Into You

Down the ladder: i`m tired

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.8577223
Overall Rank: 10381

Posted: February 25, 2009 3:26 AM PST; Last modified: February 25, 2009 3:26 AM PST
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[2] nentwined @ 75.83.196.201 | 27-Feb-09/5:59 AM | Reply

no.

no, no, no.

no.

This is the poetry you have to write and you also have to show nobody ever.

well, except us, because we like to yell.

[2] Bill Z Bub @ 99.239.12.102 | 3-Mar-09/5:30 AM | Reply

...yeah...no...
besides, why whould ghosts hang around boring old tombstone when there is a whole universe to explore?

[n/a] alvinb @ 124.217.91.228 > Bill Z Bub | 18-Mar-09/6:56 PM | Reply

coz dey are w8ing for their loved ones...

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