poemranker ::Graveyard(Cry of the Dead) by alvinb

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Free verse № 156516

Graveyard(Cry of the Dead)

Member since 2006 · Posted 25 Feb 2009 · 3 comments

Why aren't you visiting? Don't you know my spirit is suffering? Why aren't you even trying? Don't you care that my spirit is crying? Come with me... Come with me... Let's go... Come here and stay with my tombstone... Even just for one afternoon... And after that pleasant time... Happiness will be mine...

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[2] nentwined 27-Feb-09/5:59 AM Reply
no.

no, no, no.

no.

This is the poetry you have to write and you also have to show nobody ever.

well, except us, because we like to yell.
[2] Bill Z Bub 3-Mar-09/5:30 AM Reply
...yeah...no...
besides, why whould ghosts hang around boring old tombstone when there is a whole universe to explore?
[n/a] alvinb › Bill Z Bub 18-Mar-09/6:56 PM Reply
coz dey are w8ing for their loved ones...