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i`m tired (Free verse) by shazpen
I CAN STILL SLEEP ON MY WAY SHUDDER WITH NERVES TRYING TO JUMP OUT AND RUN AWAY SO NOW A SMART FREEZE-IT`S GONNA BE JUICIER AND HEALTHIER THE ONE CLEAR WINTER TIME RIVER GIVES THE SPASM OF COLD METAL ON DESERT ROCK SHE`S INDIAN.SHE`S PORTUGESE-AS WHITE AS CHALK AS RED AS APPLES JUST CHEAP COMIC ILLUSTRATION SINCE DAY ONE I`M AWAKE I CAN STAND UP MY EMANCIPATION FROM SWING PENDULUM TRAVELING SOUNG LEFT OF THE FIELD WHERE TWO FRONTS--SAD SITTING EVERYONE BORN WITH AN IMMOVABLE WIRE WOUND AROUND IN CRADLE AT SEA LEVEL HAVING TO FIGHT MY WAY THRU THE SPHERES-THRU HEAT BLOOD WATER IRON- FINALLY REACHING THE RIGHT STREET LEAVE WHATS EMPTY FOR TIGHT MOUTHS THAT FEED ON NOTHING THEY`LL NEVER STARVE

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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.8577223
Overall Rank: 10420
Posted: November 9, 2004 4:53 PM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2004 4:53 PM PST
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[4] Fayt @ 65.237.254.50 | 10-Nov-04/7:34 PM | Reply
dont capitalize it pls.
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