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i`m tired (Free verse) by shazpen
I CAN STILL SLEEP
ON MY WAY
SHUDDER WITH NERVES TRYING TO JUMP OUT AND RUN AWAY
SO NOW A SMART FREEZE-IT`S GONNA BE JUICIER AND HEALTHIER
THE ONE CLEAR WINTER TIME RIVER GIVES THE SPASM OF COLD METAL ON DESERT
ROCK
SHE`S INDIAN.SHE`S PORTUGESE-AS WHITE AS CHALK AS RED AS APPLES
JUST CHEAP COMIC ILLUSTRATION SINCE DAY ONE
I`M AWAKE I CAN STAND UP
MY EMANCIPATION FROM SWING PENDULUM TRAVELING SOUNG LEFT OF THE FIELD
WHERE TWO FRONTS--SAD SITTING
EVERYONE BORN WITH AN IMMOVABLE WIRE WOUND AROUND IN CRADLE AT SEA LEVEL
HAVING TO FIGHT MY WAY THRU THE SPHERES-THRU HEAT BLOOD WATER IRON-
FINALLY REACHING THE RIGHT STREET
LEAVE WHATS EMPTY FOR TIGHT MOUTHS THAT FEED ON NOTHING
THEY`LL NEVER STARVE
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Arithmetic Mean: 2.0
Weighted score: 4.8577223
Overall Rank: 10420
Posted: November 9, 2004 4:53 PM PST; Last modified: November 9, 2004 4:53 PM PST
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