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The Project (Free verse) by malpaso
that's how to work it, peel it off like branches from a tree. that's how it's done. carry that branchless tree, staggering from post to post like a drunken man; and when you're finished you can stick that trunk in a prefab hole, and nail your declaration to it like nailin' jello to a wall ' jello to a wall.

Up the ladder: Said The Darkness
Down the ladder: the invisible beauty

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.071139
Overall Rank: 6627
Posted: February 16, 2009 5:01 PM PST; Last modified: February 16, 2009 5:01 PM PST
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[7] Bill Z Bub @ 99.239.12.102 | 16-Feb-09/5:09 PM | Reply
I know a few prefab holes I'd like to stick my trunk into. they say it feels like warm jello pie... but like this poem it always leaves me feeling a bit empty, and wanting more. Here's an 7 for the intrigue.
[n/a] malpaso @ 70.233.138.77 | 24-Feb-09/9:27 AM | Reply
'always'? you mean like everytime you read it? how sweet!!!!
[7] Bill Z Bub @ 192.139.153.30 > malpaso | 3-Mar-09/10:04 AM | Reply
Ah you got me there. I read this every night before I go to sleep, and dream of sweet naked posts in jello.
[6] nentwined @ 75.83.196.201 | 5-Mar-09/9:46 PM | Reply
I think I need the same drugs as you to feel this right. Still, better than a lot of crap that gets nailed to the wall.
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