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the invisible beauty (Other) by Prince of Void
If that picture was you I couldn't stop thinking about you but back to reality there you are behind all fake faces .. I think it's even more beautiful just like I couldnt say a word. That's called the invisible beauty

Down the ladder: The inspection

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.5
Weighted score: 5.071139
Overall Rank: 6628
Posted: January 5, 2009 2:34 PM PST; Last modified: January 5, 2009 2:34 PM PST
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[9] Dovina @ 208.127.228.52 | 5-Jan-09/5:14 PM | Reply
Thank you, I take it personally behind my fake face, for there I am beautiful
[n/a] Prince of Void @ 77.237.64.242 > Dovina | 11-Jan-09/2:31 PM | Reply
Oh love.. you have no kind of flaw or fault
so then we begin to sing
everything that s excellent
let our hearts just as pure and fair
may beat in as one heart

Love Are you there ?
[4] nentwined @ 75.83.196.201 | 5-Mar-09/10:30 PM | Reply
meh.
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