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The Project (Free verse) by malpaso

that's how to work it, peel it off like branches from a tree. that's how it's done. carry that branchless tree, staggering from post to post like a drunken man; and when you're finished you can stick that trunk in a prefab hole, and nail your declaration to it like nailin' jello to a wall ' jello to a wall.

Bill Z Bub 16-Feb-09/5:09 PM
I know a few prefab holes I'd like to stick my trunk into. they say it feels like warm jello pie... but like this poem it always leaves me feeling a bit empty, and wanting more. Here's an 7 for the intrigue.




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