| Re: 9 Things to Eat for Breakfast & Why by A. Nomaly |
28-Feb-09/11:12 AM |
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I was just thinking though, what mixes even better with kisses, is Absinthe and tears and when your breath freezes in the air and hangs off your loves hair like icicles shining in the light of passing taxicabs.
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| Re: Pill-Popper's Confessional by Sasha |
28-Feb-09/11:09 AM |
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Last line is aces. A++++++++++ would read again,
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| Re: To Poets Whose Writing is Fecal. by SupremeDreamer |
16-Feb-09/5:26 PM |
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Because this reminds me of the old days, ten!
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| Re: 9 Things to Eat for Breakfast & Why by A. Nomaly |
16-Feb-09/5:12 PM |
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Is this the new Jenny Craig diet? I find black licorice mixes well with kisses. Nine for 9.
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| Re: The Project by malpaso |
16-Feb-09/5:09 PM |
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I know a few prefab holes I'd like to stick my trunk into. they say it feels like warm jello pie... but like this poem it always leaves me feeling a bit empty, and wanting more. Here's an 7 for the intrigue.
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| Re: Echoes of Eichmann by Caducus |
15-Feb-09/2:16 PM |
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this one is difficult. I shall rate it with a randomly generated number.
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| Re: To my Moneta by Bill Z Bub |
15-Feb-09/10:59 AM |
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This is my St. Valentine's Day poem. Think Hallmark would buy it?
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| Re: a comment on Gladly For Love by sliver |
14-Feb-09/6:04 PM |
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I believe Dovina meant that the last stanza reveals that this poem is addressed to someone who you don't know. Thus she cannot suggest you write it down and mail it, since you have no one to mail it to.
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| Re: in this bus terminal of the future by nentwined |
14-Feb-09/6:00 PM |
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This place is dead! Or perhaps hibernating?
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| Re: Pink BAlls by EAger to Offend |
14-Feb-09/5:48 PM |
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I'd settle for two, but knight thee with a 10.
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| Re: You're passionate by EAger to Offend |
14-Feb-09/5:47 PM |
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Sounds like someone I know.
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| Re: Better Things by EAger to Offend |
21-Aug-08/7:59 PM |
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| Re: a comment on the only thing worse than living (revised, liberated) by Bill Z Bub |
6-Jul-06/2:28 PM |
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| Re: a comment on water falls by Bill Z Bub |
5-Jul-06/1:41 AM |
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| Re: a comment on canada day by Bill Z Bub |
5-Jul-06/12:57 AM |
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ok, that was just a wild guess based on the word "cargo".
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| Re: a comment on canada day by Bill Z Bub |
4-Jul-06/7:02 PM |
Your name isn't familiar.
... INTRANSIT?
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| Re: canada day by Bill Z Bub |
1-Jul-06/6:30 AM |
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Yeah not my best work thats for sure. I'm out of practice. But just you wait...
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| Re: Send The Devil... by horus8 |
7-May-06/11:22 AM |
You're still here? Awesome. I missed this place...
alienboy aka bill z bub
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| Re: The Angry Bush by wilco |
26-Nov-05/3:06 PM |
If I could impeach an angry bush...
Love it.
10 for the politics alone.
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| Re: i dream in nine minute increments by ay deee |
26-Nov-05/2:43 PM |
The third line had me confused, until I finally realized on the fourth read that you meant "an old one-speed".
Violent dreams. Guns never appear in my dreams. Instead, people point their fingers and say BANG. Then the bad thing falls over.
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