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Free verse № 152589

Better Things

Member since 2003 · Posted 20 Jun 2007 · 4 comments

there are better things than remembering birhtdays,gettting to werk on time, perfect spelling, being liked, good grades, being understood, winning an easy fight, porn, winning an easy fuck, keeping up with the joneses, having your four-digit paycheque negated by your five-digit debt, being praised by a drunk, being drunk, being stoned, more money for more responsibility, ... but when it's all over I bet there's nothing better than a long, long slee[.

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4 comments

[8] Ranger 21-Jun-07/5:18 AM Reply
I personally love a good long slee[.
[7] drnick 21-Jun-07/1:58 PM Reply
Wouldn't this be considered a prose? Either way, pretty good stuff.
[8] Skamper 21-Jun-07/4:00 PM Reply
Not bad at all.
[8] Bill Z Bub 21-Aug-08/7:59 PM Reply
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