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Better Things (Free verse) by EAger to Offend
there are better things than remembering birhtdays,gettting to werk on time, perfect spelling, being liked, good grades, being understood, winning an easy fight, porn, winning an easy fuck, keeping up with the joneses, having your four-digit paycheque negated by your five-digit debt, being praised by a drunk, being drunk, being stoned, more money for more responsibility, ... but when it's all over I bet there's nothing better than a long, long slee[.

Up the ladder: The Little Merman
Down the ladder: Stand by me

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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5423
Posted: June 20, 2007 11:01 PM PDT; Last modified: June 20, 2007 11:01 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] Ranger @ 81.152.176.129 | 21-Jun-07/5:18 AM | Reply
I personally love a good long slee[.
[7] drnick @ 24.247.158.152 | 21-Jun-07/1:58 PM | Reply
Wouldn't this be considered a prose? Either way, pretty good stuff.
[8] Skamper @ 202.6.129.150 | 21-Jun-07/4:00 PM | Reply
Not bad at all.
[8] Bill Z Bub @ 99.239.12.102 | 21-Aug-08/7:59 PM | Reply
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