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Looking Outside (Other) by etherealmaiden
I am on the inside
Looking at the outside
Hoping to feel the warmth of the sun
But those happy days are done.
I can see them playing
I can see them laying
Themselves out on the grass in the park
Little children chasing a single lark,
Laughing, crying at a small cut
Quickly recovering, they feel the joy but
I am on the inside
Looking at the outside.
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Arithmetic Mean: 6.2
Weighted score: 5.1430435
Overall Rank: 5401
Posted: February 29, 2004 12:37 PM PST; Last modified: March 1, 2004 10:56 AM PST
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- from 'An Atheist's Values' by Richard Robinson, Fellow of Oriel College, Oxford