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Looking Outside (Other) by etherealmaiden

I am on the inside Looking at the outside Hoping to feel the warmth of the sun But those happy days are done. I can see them playing I can see them laying Themselves out on the grass in the park Little children chasing a single lark, Laughing, crying at a small cut Quickly recovering, they feel the joy but I am on the inside Looking at the outside.

richa 2-Mar-04/5:27 AM
You are on the inside looking out, you see children playing, chasing a lark, cutting themselves, getting over it.

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