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You're passionate (Free verse) by EAger to Offend
Lost. Lost in life. There is just too much. Too much love. Too much desire. Simple pleasures. Grand dreams. Deep fascinations, shallow understanding, And beyond vast possibility, true limits. Creation-null, impatience-diary. Every scribble, every stipple, hatching and rehashing, A record of disapointment. A passion for the esoteric. A way of believing there is something more. A totally human need.

Up the ladder: THINK ABOUT ME
Down the ladder: Death's Invitation

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8584
Posted: January 12, 2008 2:27 AM PST; Last modified: January 12, 2008 2:27 AM PST
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Comments:
[6] Dovina @ 208.127.216.239 | 17-Jan-08/4:24 PM | Reply
"Deep fascinations, shallow understanding" That ought to be everyone's goal
[8] Bill Z Bub @ 99.239.12.102 | 14-Feb-09/5:47 PM | Reply
Sounds like someone I know.
[0] wDaphnew @ 85.210.6.129 | 31-Dec-11/8:53 AM | Reply
Drivel and so pretentious I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !
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