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You're passionate

by EAger to Offend

Member since 2003 · Posted 12 Jan 2008 · 3 comments

Lost. Lost in life. There is just too much. Too much love. Too much desire. Simple pleasures. Grand dreams. Deep fascinations, shallow understanding, And beyond vast possibility, true limits. Creation-null, impatience-diary. Every scribble, every stipple, hatching and rehashing, A record of disapointment. A passion for the esoteric. A way of believing there is something more. A totally human need.

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[6] Dovina 17-Jan-08/4:24 PM Reply
"Deep fascinations, shallow understanding" That ought to be everyone's goal
[8] Bill Z Bub 14-Feb-09/5:47 PM Reply
Sounds like someone I know.
[0] wDaphnew 31-Dec-11/8:53 AM Reply
Drivel and so pretentious I think you should post it at my new website: http://www.newpoetryshared.proboards.com !