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Letters Left Unsent (Free verse) by ChaseValentine
I. You exist in the corner of my eye. Only headlights outside my window coming up the drive. II. Your voice, the courting song of crickets, is silenced by my approach. III. You skitter away on anxious paws when I reach under the car to pet you.

Up the ladder: You're passionate
Down the ladder: Lost Forever

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.6666665
Weighted score: 4.9602656
Overall Rank: 8634
Posted: April 26, 2005 3:49 PM PDT; Last modified: April 26, 2005 3:49 PM PDT
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[8] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.130.62.63 | 27-Apr-05/3:47 PM | Reply
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