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You're passionate (Free verse) by EAger to Offend

Lost. Lost in life. There is just too much. Too much love. Too much desire. Simple pleasures. Grand dreams. Deep fascinations, shallow understanding, And beyond vast possibility, true limits. Creation-null, impatience-diary. Every scribble, every stipple, hatching and rehashing, A record of disapointment. A passion for the esoteric. A way of believing there is something more. A totally human need.

Dovina 17-Jan-08/4:24 PM
"Deep fascinations, shallow understanding" That ought to be everyone's goal




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