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for the slaves and the seekers (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub
Oh we broken, beautiful, surgical-steel whores,
laserburned children of a starry galactic night,
your cheeks have bloomed like red carnations
kissed by the dew of tender frustrations.
I taste the saltiness of truth on my tongue,
from a place no lies are possible.
The knot is tightened
while you writhe
and teach me how to pass each station;
we penetrate
for purification.
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Arithmetic Mean: 7.6666665
Weighted score: 5.3178744
Overall Rank: 3511
Posted: February 28, 2009 11:05 AM PST; Last modified: February 28, 2009 1:40 PM PST
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