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for the slaves and the seekers (Free verse) by Bill Z Bub
Oh we broken, beautiful, surgical-steel whores, laserburned children of a starry galactic night, your cheeks have bloomed like red carnations kissed by the dew of tender frustrations. I taste the saltiness of truth on my tongue, from a place no lies are possible. The knot is tightened while you writhe and teach me how to pass each station; we penetrate for purification.

Up the ladder: Love or Hate
Down the ladder: Rock and Roll

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.6666665
Weighted score: 5.3178744
Overall Rank: 3457
Posted: February 28, 2009 11:05 AM PST; Last modified: February 28, 2009 1:40 PM PST
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[8] Blindpoetry @ 68.226.178.153 | 1-Mar-09/11:13 PM | Reply
lol
[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 192.139.153.30 | 2-Mar-09/8:40 AM | Reply
Glad my delightful tragicomical farce amused you, Blindpoetry. Now, who's up for some flogging?
[6] nentwined @ 75.83.196.201 | 5-Mar-09/10:15 PM | Reply
hmm.

hmm hmm hmm.

hmm.

and no, that's not supposed to mean any more than it says ;)
[9] SupremeDreamer @ 75.30.177.160 | 7-Mar-09/2:55 PM | Reply
I say we prefer rough'n dirty penetration
'cause it's better than solitary masturbation!
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