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dreams (Other) by babygurl420
A Lost Petal wondering souls I See The Dream You Seek follow Me Please, If You Dare.The Dream Is Coming For You And Me.I Return By Your Side With A Heart In My Hand It Was Like A Bright Burning Fire Dancing To The Slow Music Turning.My Heart As Smooth As Ivory has Turned To A Lonely Sulfur.I Retire My Heart Now To You,Love Me Because I Love you..........

Up the ladder: Slow death

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Arithmetic Mean: 0.4
Weighted score: 4.4516664
Overall Rank: 12886
Posted: March 8, 2003 8:46 PM PST; Last modified: March 8, 2003 8:46 PM PST
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[n/a] Bill Z Bub @ 24.112.224.232 | 8-Mar-03/9:07 PM | Reply
Whoa, slow down and try some line breaks. Then get back to us. Don't call you, we'll call us.
[n/a] TrulyUnique0642 @ 67.24.137.188 > Bill Z Bub | 9-Mar-03/3:49 PM | Reply
Agreed
[0] lastobelus @ 217.226.25.123 | 10-Mar-03/5:49 PM | Reply
methamphetamines burn holes in your brain.

I've heard.
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