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dreams (Other) by babygurl420

A Lost Petal wondering souls I See The Dream You Seek follow Me Please, If You Dare.The Dream Is Coming For You And Me.I Return By Your Side With A Heart In My Hand It Was Like A Bright Burning Fire Dancing To The Slow Music Turning.My Heart As Smooth As Ivory has Turned To A Lonely Sulfur.I Retire My Heart Now To You,Love Me Because I Love you..........

Bill Z Bub 8-Mar-03/9:07 PM
Whoa, slow down and try some line breaks. Then get back to us. Don't call you, we'll call us.




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