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Slow death (Free verse) by Blade
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...........(BREATH!)........ AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaa.........(masturbate.. ...SIGH)........ AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAA..........(COFFEE...YES PLEASE!)............. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.........(QUICK SHOWER FOLLOWED BY AFTERNOON TEA).............. AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAA........(newspaper crossword)........... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAand DEATH! oh not quite dead yet... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.....sorry no morphine but any paracetamol...... AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OW!

Down the ladder: dreams

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Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Weighted score: 4.451706
Overall Rank: 12885
Posted: November 18, 2002 2:23 AM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2002 2:23 AM PST
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[n/a] deleted user @ 212.219.142.161 | 18-Nov-02/4:54 AM | Reply
Hehheh, I hav to say this made me smile, and it's certainly better than that poem about 'Maria'.10
[0] Tascobar @ 193.130.87.54 | 18-Nov-02/5:19 AM | Reply
Shiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiit. 0. If only the slow death were that of your desire to compose.
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.115 | 18-Nov-02/6:43 AM | Reply
you know, gouging your eyes out with a slightly tarnished soup spoon is quicker. It`s also less painful for the readers.
[n/a] Yardbird @ 212.219.142.161 > razorgrin | 25-Nov-02/2:25 AM | Reply
It's all good!!!
[n/a] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Nov-02/12:03 PM | Reply
are you totally retarded, or just in need of a friend? either or, i believe they're now both totally irrelevant. it pains me to have to say this but you are no longer worth my votes or my time. farewell.
[n/a] cleverdevice @ 212.219.142.161 | 19-Nov-02/2:35 AM | Reply
I think this is bloody brilliant! Especially as I had most input, didn't I blade? Why did you not recognize my worth and add my name somewhere? Inthe title would be nice. And the alternative title should be 'A long fall'. 10
[8] roses are read @ 171.66.185.138 | 1-Dec-02/3:47 PM | Reply
very funny...excedingly lovely...
[n/a] SP REYNOLDS @ 209.178.160.109 | 22-Dec-02/2:12 PM | Reply
YESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i need to build an amusement park as well
[7] Shuushin @ 65.175.179.197 | 5-Oct-06/4:16 AM | Reply
A slow death? More like a day in the life!
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