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Slow death (Free verse) by Blade AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA...........(BREATH!)........
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAaaaaaaaaaa.........(masturbate..
...SIGH)........
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AAAA..........(COFFEE...YES PLEASE!).............
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.........(QUICK
SHOWER FOLLOWED BY AFTERNOON TEA)..............
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AAAAAAAAAAAA........(newspaper crossword)...........
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAand
DEATH! oh not quite dead yet...
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA.....sorry no morphine but any paracetamol......
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA OW!
Up the ladder:
The Autopsy (as shown on Channel Four)
Down the ladder:
dreams
Votes: (green: user, blue: anonymous)
Arithmetic Mean: 4.25
Posted: November 18, 2002 2:23 AM PST; Last modified: November 18, 2002 2:23 AM PSTWeighted score: 4.451706 Overall Rank: 12890 Comments:
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18-Nov-02/4:54 AM
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Hehheh, I hav to say this made me smile, and it's certainly better than that poem about 'Maria'.10
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you know, gouging your eyes out with a slightly tarnished soup spoon is quicker. It`s also less painful for the readers.
It's all good!!!
are you totally retarded, or just in need of a friend? either or, i believe they're now both totally irrelevant. it pains me to have to say this but you are no longer worth my votes or my time. farewell.
I think this is bloody brilliant! Especially as I had most input, didn't I blade? Why did you not recognize my worth and add my name somewhere? Inthe title would be nice. And the alternative title should be 'A long fall'. 10
very funny...excedingly lovely...
YESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!
i need to build an amusement park as well
A slow death? More like a day in the life!
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