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Slow death (Free verse) by Blade

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cleverdevice 19-Nov-02/2:35 AM
I think this is bloody brilliant! Especially as I had most input, didn't I blade? Why did you not recognize my worth and add my name somewhere? Inthe title would be nice. And the alternative title should be 'A long fall'. 10




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