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The Autopsy (as shown on Channel Four) (Haiku) by Nicholas Jones
Fuck! They're slicing brains, His organs on a platter, I need a bucket.

Up the ladder: Fact About the Wind
Down the ladder: Slow death

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Overall Rank: 12889
Posted: November 22, 2002 3:34 AM PST; Last modified: November 22, 2002 3:34 AM PST
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[7] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 22-Nov-02/3:56 AM | Reply
trouble is the buckets full of organs. You should be educating yourself on late night channel 5 B movies, you'd see plenty of 'buckets' on that (all botox and no brains)
[n/a] Nicholas Jones @ 137.44.1.200 > Caducus | 22-Nov-02/3:59 AM | Reply
I needed the bucket because I thought I was going to spew. It was grim viewing, but somehow I wanted to watch it to see how I would react.
[10] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.106 | 22-Nov-02/6:19 AM | Reply
I wanted to see it.
[8] -=SeTTle=- @ 140.186.49.87 | 23-Nov-02/8:31 PM | Reply
OH GREAT NOW I HAVE ANOTHER ERECTION.
[5] Robert K Foster @ 209.68.70.205 | 29-May-03/10:43 AM | Reply
troubling.
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