on The Beauty of His Last Night Wasted by OneFingerAnswer
5 Feb 2003, 12:28 PM
Wonderful, this rocks.
on The Grapes of Wrath by ==Doylum
5 Feb 2003, 12:25 PM
Not as good as Harry Potter but still worthy of a nine! Keep it up!
on Harry Potter and the philosophers stone by ==Doylum
5 Feb 2003, 12:23 PM
I've not laughed this much for ages. You may have a nine, no wait, this is the best parody yet and it's not a haiku, here's a laughter filled ten!
on The Marble Jar & the new boy, Primrose Avenue, Yesteryear. by ==Doylum
5 Feb 2003, 12:19 PM
Cool, ish, kind of, 9
on Charles and Eddie by Nicholas Jones
5 Feb 2003, 12:17 PM
Whoaaaa, weird at first...I think in my confusion I'll give an 8
on An Ode to the professor, but not Marianne by Jeremi B. Handrinos
5 Feb 2003, 12:12 PM
Fun
replying on Beauty, sleeping by Ranger
5 Feb 2003, 12:09 PM
Not only are you a sarcastic bastard, you also make no sense. What are you talking about? Grimm one and Grimm two probably wouldn't say a thing about this poem, mainly because they're dead. How could you have (note that it should be 'have', not 'of') ever doubted me what? What the fuck are you on about? Please explain. Also please explain the whole Brit poppers thing.
Sooo...that over, what is so bad with this one as to warrant it a zero, may I be so bold as to ask? You don't seem to like any style other than your own, is that all that's wrong with this? Or is it really a huge pile of shit? Huh? Huh?
Sooo...that over, what is so bad with this one as to warrant it a zero, may I be so bold as to ask? You don't seem to like any style other than your own, is that all that's wrong with this? Or is it really a huge pile of shit? Huh? Huh?
on Slow motion by INTRANSIT
1 Feb 2003, 11:08 PM
Has a lot of potential, mr intransit. Keep going, though, I agree with the above comment, it does need a bit more.
on Run Forest! Run... by Bachus
1 Feb 2003, 9:29 AM
This is by far your best work!!!
on Spring Delight by Teen14
1 Feb 2003, 9:28 AM
Lovely. Spring rolls as well (I'm shamelessly self-promoting).
on Impossibilities, and Marvel Comical Heroes. by Bachus
1 Feb 2003, 9:26 AM
Wowee wow! Fun fun fun!
Is it only a third of Americans that believe that?
Is it only a third of Americans that believe that?
on The Merry Man by Teen14
1 Feb 2003, 9:24 AM
Nice poem!
replying on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike
31 Jan 2003, 1:05 PM
Have you read any of Caducus' poems? Try "Sawn off shotgun blues", or "Quarry of the Devil and Croupier". His is not teen angst.
You're right about Blade, though.
You're right about Blade, though.
on Because The Ground Is Still Frozen by razorgrin
31 Jan 2003, 1:02 PM
Exactly.
on Lovers Game by scitz
31 Jan 2003, 12:58 PM
Pretty good. sado-masochism I believe has a wossname, hyphon type thing in between.
on All I Feel by brokenwing
31 Jan 2003, 12:52 PM
'Fluorescent'
Like the poem, it is one of your best.
Like the poem, it is one of your best.
replying on unsent by Bill Z Bub
31 Jan 2003, 12:50 PM
Friends are what we'll always be? Something like that? Ah well. Still like it.
on A Little Nightmare by Teen14
31 Jan 2003, 12:47 PM
Bold, straight to the point although I still don't know what the nightmare is.