Re: Stripping the willow by ecargo	4-Dec-15/3:31 PM
ecargo! I wanted to get in touch a while back but had no way. Are you still writing?
Re: Glossary without an index by daniella	3-Oct-14/3:28 PM
Some cool ideas. The whole thing feels quite bleak - or have I read it wrong?
Re: A mag that PAYS??? by SupremeDreamer	3-Oct-14/3:19 PM
Only one way to find out, right?
Re: Sponds Hill, Cheshire, 26 December 2013 by Nicholas Jones	3-Oct-14/3:17 PM
I used to live near-ish to there. Agree with nentwined - much of this is lovely. I particularly like the closing lines - very nice.
Re: The Owl in the Wasteland by Caducus	22-Jun-12/4:35 PM
I haven't a clue what's going on here.
Re: a comment on The Cat Goddess by nypoet22	22-Jun-12/4:21 PM
Good God, yes - I'd forgotten about that! It's too late to go rooting round a broken computer tonight, but I wrote a renga once upon a time after that. Maybe I'll post it one day. (Actually, having read our effort, it wasn't at all bad!)
Re: Facebook Post by Skamper	22-Jun-12/4:14 PM
For the lulz -10-
Re: The Cat Goddess by nypoet22	22-Jun-12/4:11 PM
Mostly ace. May I suggest some crits? I'm going to anyway. Line 4 trips the rhythm too much - perhaps needs revising? Line 8 - get rid of 'like'. It's unnecessary and interrupts the flow. As someone's already said, 'valo(u)r' and 'greater' just don't do it. The other rhymes are perfect (flesh/creche? Fantastic!) so don't spoil it right at the end. Otherwise, like -8-
Re: a comment on Max's Poems by nentwined	22-Jun-12/4:06 PM
Marvellous.
Re: a comment on Max's Poems by nentwined	22-Jun-12/4:01 PM
Truthfully, this has made my day. There's no synopsis or review - what's in the book? Your poemes?
Re: Max's Poems by nentwined	22-Jun-12/3:57 PM
Is that rockmage on the cover?
Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina	22-Jun-12/3:51 PM
This is one of those beautiful dystopian images. You know, where Time Team 3000 finally prises open the blast doors to see the server, bathed in an eerie glow, still humming away.
Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina	22-Jun-12/3:48 PM
Every man has his price. And if all else fails, just train a bear or something.
Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina	22-Jun-12/3:46 PM
Either that or a five-foot patent leather spanking stick emblazoned with the words "EVEN IN THE DEATHLY GRIP OF MY ANGST I WILL BE SOCIABLE". Too much to ask?
Re: a comment on Belle Melange/The Curse of Millhaven by lmp	22-Jun-12/3:40 PM
I did not know back then, but guess what? I do now. He's much better when he's in a bloodthirsty mood. In truth I can't remember how this was originally. Did you change much?
Re: a comment on Help! by Dovina	22-Jun-12/3:35 PM
The problem wasn't that people graduated, but rather that the fun people left. You know, the ones who'd comment and talk and (occasionally) troll. All poemeranker got left with was an incessant queue of MOAR POETRYS being posted with very few users bothering to engage with each other. Once there was a community, now there is a ghost town.
Re: Help! by Dovina	22-Jun-12/3:29 PM
Yes. Eventually, yes.
Re: a comment on Spanish Patio at Old Mission Inn by Dovina	18-Oct-08/5:01 PM
My last post only notched up a measly 7 comments and half of them were probably mine. And as the whole point of poemeranker is to achieve the highest comment average in the entire universe I think posting again is a vain endeavour.
Re: a comment on Mountain Fever by Celticai	18-Oct-08/4:56 PM
Then either it's not a very good poem, or we're not very good readers.
Re: Spanish Patio at Old Mission Inn by Dovina	14-Oct-08/1:34 AM
I like bits of this - some of the first stanza, and the last two lines in particular. 'Fall' would work better than 'fail' for me. I don't think the overtly Biblical imagery does it any favours though. I was thinking more along the lines of an old Gordon Lightfoot song - 'Spanish Moss'.