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Spanish Patio at Old Mission Inn (Free verse) by Dovina
When faith drops so low that
God fails to exist
When grief is a pathogen
masking true looks
When rationality deems pleasure
is not worth the trouble
When a walk is so boring
itâs nothing but stiff
And nobody hears you cry
Then, amid groping and stumbling
with surprise
you land at a place
and the place understands
It answers even so strong a case
as if it knew charm and grace
And welcomes your wonder at
what is animate and who is not
The Spanish Patio
at Old Mission Innâ
meaningless clutter it seems at first
exuberance of rock and tile and wood
portico fountain Saltillo viga
Then it clutches, grabs and stops
scrapes off the faults that cling
kicks out darkness like Edenâs sinners
and forces renewal
Footsteps slow
voices lower
air of peace works
into you
Each one staggers about the earth
searching searching
waiting for the dross to fall
Then, as if selected
by maker or made
swallowed in a womb of healing
disposition and world remake
in a place
without a reason
Why does this place repel invasion
while grander temples fail?
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Weighted score: 5.1589375
Overall Rank: 5122
Posted: October 10, 2008 9:15 PM PDT; Last modified: October 10, 2008 9:15 PM PDT
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