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flow-charts (Free verse) by FreeFormFixation Kids these days...
The elbow craze,
line up and rub a star.
But just stay lazy.
Sleep, my baby.
Kids these days have
jobs and cars. I
see myself reflected
there,
(all silver dipped in lard).
Super-shiny,
spoilt and whiny.
Kids these days are smart!
Up the ladder:
Asbestosis
Down the ladder:
Rescue Me
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Posted: August 11, 2006 5:38 PM PDT; Last modified: August 11, 2006 5:38 PM PDTWeighted score: 5.1589375 Overall Rank: 5148 Comments:
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MacFrantic @ 71.208.112.134
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12-Aug-06/1:00 AM
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Ha! "Flows" perfectly. A wonderful statement. Especially liked the last three lines. Kudos.
Very nice.
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