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Kids these days... The elbow craze, line up and rub a star. But just stay lazy. Sleep, my baby. Kids these days have jobs and cars. I see myself reflected there, (all silver dipped in lard). Super-shiny, spoilt and whiny. Kids these days are smart!
MacFrantic
12-Aug-06/1:00 AM
Ha! "Flows" perfectly. A wonderful statement. Especially liked the last three lines. Kudos.
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