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Spring Delight (Other) by Teen14
Rushing through the water's might I devour spring delight Singing birds and playing squirrels In the valley they all whirl The air is fresh and this is the best with all glory over all Running through the meadows I sing Thanking God for such a spring We laugh and play the day away Until night goes on its way Then we buzz with firelies Hoping spring will never die The moon shines bright as we rest tonight And wait for another day of spring delight.

Up the ladder: Prelude to a Legend
Down the ladder: "Crying"

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.3333335
Weighted score: 5.0896473
Overall Rank: 6205
Posted: January 31, 2003 4:03 PM PST; Last modified: January 31, 2003 4:03 PM PST
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[8] Ranger @ 81.132.42.59 | 1-Feb-03/9:28 AM | Reply
Lovely. Spring rolls as well (I'm shamelessly self-promoting).
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