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Spring Delight

Member since 2003 · Posted 31 Jan 2003 · 1 comment

Rushing through the water's might I devour spring delight Singing birds and playing squirrels In the valley they all whirl The air is fresh and this is the best with all glory over all Running through the meadows I sing Thanking God for such a spring We laugh and play the day away Until night goes on its way Then we buzz with firelies Hoping spring will never die The moon shines bright as we rest tonight And wait for another day of spring delight.

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[8] Ranger 1-Feb-03/9:28 AM Reply
Lovely. Spring rolls as well (I'm shamelessly self-promoting).