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"Crying" (Free verse) by Jaketiger
Im feeling tired, and lost,
Dont know what im do, cause i feel so hurt,
The feeling can't be described in just plain words,
It like a needle in my heart, i can't help the crying,
That why im sitting here trying to let it out,
But im afraid that if i do of what youll say.
And every day,
I feel more distant than i was , and i start cry,
My eyes they cant see, and i cant think, but i keep trying,
Love is such a painfull thing, for me,
Not knowing if you still love me, for me is worse then death.
Or is our love thats dieing,
Cause if it is i would be lieing , just to stop crying,
I love you some much that i feel like dieing,
Just to end the pain of this distance between us,
But i hold on to tomorrow, for hope that this sorrow,
will soon end, but i know that ill love you untill the end.
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Weighted score: 5.0896473
Overall Rank: 6206
Posted: February 23, 2003 9:57 PM PST; Last modified: February 23, 2003 9:57 PM PST
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