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"Crying" (Free verse) by Jaketiger

Im feeling tired, and lost, Dont know what im do, cause i feel so hurt, The feeling can't be described in just plain words, It like a needle in my heart, i can't help the crying, That why im sitting here trying to let it out, But im afraid that if i do of what youll say. And every day, I feel more distant than i was , and i start cry, My eyes they cant see, and i cant think, but i keep trying, Love is such a painfull thing, for me, Not knowing if you still love me, for me is worse then death. Or is our love thats dieing, Cause if it is i would be lieing , just to stop crying, I love you some much that i feel like dieing, Just to end the pain of this distance between us, But i hold on to tomorrow, for hope that this sorrow, will soon end, but i know that ill love you untill the end.

CrAzYlAdY Surukain 26-Feb-03/2:15 PM
.......READ! I said not AS judgemental meaning, i can be but i am not as serious, and i do agree with the use of language but i am no clueless twit.... y would u call me a pregnant goldfish neway? lol. Besides, Yes i do kinda agree, but yr last sentence was pretty much useless , now if u claim sumones work was dictated as tho it were for a 3 year old, u'd think that u would notice yr own mistake. !AS! Once again im not AS judgemental, I AM, but not as harsh. .....great, i really need to stop replying to these damn comments.....




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