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Lovers Game

Member since 2002 · Posted 31 Jan 2003 · Edited 25 May 2003 · 4 comments

We were cotton dwellers of nocturne, And our skin was fastened like shoelaces, Playing the lovers game, Moth's to a flame waiting to burn, Living out of synthetic suitcases. We met in forgotten suburban streets Where Victorian lampposts shone like Turkish delight We glided like pollen in tainted sheets, And left at morning light. If he were to find us would you cry? A life as his arm ornament? Or would you rather die. Complications are stronger than temptations, Carnal hungers can consume the carnivor, Loving too much made you love me no more, The tie that binds can asphixiate, I was just escapism, And how you taught me to suffocate, Love exchanged for lust, lies for trust, Gold for rust, Making Love for Sado Masochism, You gave me hope disguised as cynicism. He didn't have you neither did I, And looking back through rose tinted spectacles, I look at my insecurity then, and know why.

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4 comments

[8] Ranger 31-Jan-03/12:58 PM Reply
Pretty good. sado-masochism I believe has a wossname, hyphon type thing in between.
[8] Jeremi B. Handrinos 1-Mar-03/11:10 PM Reply
Michael Hutchinson Rocks!!!!!!!!!
[7] richa 25-Apr-03/11:43 AM Reply
This is awful hard work to read

Some nice images, some surreal images plenty of creative energy
[7] deleted user 25-May-03/3:46 PM Reply
never leave home w/o your rosed colored glasses...life is much better