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Lovers Game (Free verse) by scitz
We were cotton dwellers of nocturne, And our skin was fastened like shoelaces, Playing the lovers game, Moth's to a flame waiting to burn, Living out of synthetic suitcases. We met in forgotten suburban streets Where Victorian lampposts shone like Turkish delight We glided like pollen in tainted sheets, And left at morning light. If he were to find us would you cry? A life as his arm ornament? Or would you rather die. Complications are stronger than temptations, Carnal hungers can consume the carnivor, Loving too much made you love me no more, The tie that binds can asphixiate, I was just escapism, And how you taught me to suffocate, Love exchanged for lust, lies for trust, Gold for rust, Making Love for Sado Masochism, You gave me hope disguised as cynicism. He didn't have you neither did I, And looking back through rose tinted spectacles, I look at my insecurity then, and know why.

Down the ladder: Roadside Testimony

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.714286
Weighted score: 5.192101
Overall Rank: 4629
Posted: January 31, 2003 5:42 AM PST; Last modified: May 25, 2003 1:57 PM PDT
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Comments:
[8] Ranger @ 62.7.132.88 | 31-Jan-03/12:58 PM | Reply
Pretty good. sado-masochism I believe has a wossname, hyphon type thing in between.
[8] Jeremi B. Handrinos @ 24.126.113.154 | 1-Mar-03/11:10 PM | Reply
Michael Hutchinson Rocks!!!!!!!!!
[7] richa @ 195.92.67.66 | 25-Apr-03/11:43 AM | Reply
This is awful hard work to read

Some nice images, some surreal images plenty of creative energy
[7] deleted user @ 68.82.229.248 | 25-May-03/3:46 PM | Reply
never leave home w/o your rosed colored glasses...life is much better
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