Re: My Brother's Demons by Istar Ohta	10-Jan-03/9:21 AM
Its a shame no-one read this it deserved some critique. I enjoyed this but my interest started waning on the last 2 stanzas, its a good poem otherwise, why not re submit? heres a 6
Re: Nightwalker by Another Bobjim?!?!	10-Jan-03/8:57 AM
Four flies on grey velvet -7
Re: Apocalypse by marvelis	10-Jan-03/8:49 AM
better now s3 is sorted here is your fat lady .....8
Re: fade in by inka	10-Jan-03/2:38 AM
Pretty Good -7-
Re: heathen love by w~* ATHENA *~w	10-Jan-03/2:38 AM
Kicking piece
Re: ice dreams by w~* ATHENA *~w	10-Jan-03/2:26 AM
I love this its kind of eerie very atmospheric -10
Re: ice dreams by w~* ATHENA *~w	10-Jan-03/2:22 AM
Thought this was a bit anonymous on a 1st read but I keep reading it and more reactions follow each time. i will vote soon
Re: if she only knew by ChunkyHunkyMonkey	10-Jan-03/2:11 AM
I wouldn't say this is particularly poignant or heart wrenching but its faily well told and from the heart so a worthy 7, i too have written of loss (a lot)
Re: Pain in Death by Freethinker1602	9-Jan-03/1:52 AM
Impressive, but why that thing at the end? your poem is moving enough just dedicate it thats a 2 word salute, Condolences ! -8-
Re: genuine by brazen	9-Jan-03/1:49 AM
As in most cases where you are concerned - Excellent read 9
Re: Forgotten by T'ien	8-Jan-03/8:10 AM
Enjoyed this -7-
Re: Damn Americans by T'ien	8-Jan-03/8:09 AM
Oh dear I fear people are going to correct you that u is spelled 'you' and annoying is mispelled also, if your gonna have a go dont leave yourself open for corrections
Re: 9/11/2001 by MuDvAyNe	8-Jan-03/8:07 AM
Shit I feel really stupid, please explain the connection 'HOUSE' has with Sep11?
Re: Backwards baby blend by Blade	8-Jan-03/5:01 AM
Blade is back ! that in itself is poetry. This appealed to my Dr Evil side and I'm off to buy a blender, your pal Ranger says you want this zeroed to the point of death well my friend incase hes wrong here is a 5 it deserved an 8 but if you want zero i will oblige just grunt and its yours.
Re: electronically by Quarton	8-Jan-03/4:57 AM
When you read this one cant help but feel quite amazed at how chipped we really are, and dependant on machines, its weakly told in parts and stron gin others but a good subject to pick up on -6-
Re: Cat by Topaz Servias	8-Jan-03/4:55 AM
For a 10 minute piece of poetry its very good, the last stanzas crap but apart from that it works really well, cats are like snakes with fur mine is truly evil. -7-
Re: Apocalypse by marvelis	8-Jan-03/4:52 AM
I was enjoying this until you repeated stanza 3. Its got a good narrative which is interrupted by the 'his might' lines they somehow affect the flow. Anyway It doesnt deserve less than a 6 I'm giving a 7 however.
Re: insomnia by Bill Z Bub	8-Jan-03/4:44 AM
Desperation drips from the teeth of this gnarling beast, liked the overtones of darkness in this -8-
Re: Tingling by INTRANSIT	8-Jan-03/3:45 AM
how rude of me ...9
Re: Tingling by INTRANSIT	8-Jan-03/3:44 AM
Did you write this on your travels? its wild and I almost enjoyed it as much as the one where you ripped the guts from the grandfather clock, didnt like the *PIFF* bit, it just fucks the end up otherwise perfect.