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Pain in Death (Free verse) by Freethinker1602
The first shot rings....
*BANG
You feel your breath ebb away
You can't see, pulse quickens
The silence makes your head throb
The sound returns again to your conscious
Mocking you for ever caring
The second shot rings
Bang
The noise seems further away now
Memories much too painful, confusion
Is it possible to become one with death?
Just to know that the killer remains silent is pain
If only you knew of a way for vengence to be right
Would it make the ringing stop?
The final shot is there to take your soul
bang
If it were your way you'd go free
Prepare, the blade is double edged though it
Pierces your skin it still slays your soul
Do you know what you could have been thinking
Their pain would never ease yours
The noise is gone it will only haunt you
The sanity no longer in question
Though the memory is equally haunting
Why did we once think of killing....
But now which path is just
To stop feeling the pain, sacrifice the happiness
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Arithmetic Mean: 3.75
Weighted score: 4.8509965
Overall Rank: 10516
Posted: January 8, 2003 10:33 PM PST; Last modified: July 25, 2003 11:52 PM PDT
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