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9/11/2001 (Free verse) by MuDvAyNe
"9...11" he said, and bowed his head "HOUSE" someone yelled from the back row

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Overall Rank: 12707
Posted: January 8, 2003 6:33 AM PST; Last modified: January 8, 2003 7:00 AM PST
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[5] deleted user @ 212.219.142.161 | 8-Jan-03/6:45 AM | Reply
eh? Was someone playing poker or something?Royal flush would have been more...poetic.natch
[n/a] MuDvAyNe @ 212.219.142.161 > deleted user | 8-Jan-03/6:48 AM | Reply
You have missed the point ENTIRELY freddy, think about the title
[n/a] deadstar @ 212.219.142.161 | 8-Jan-03/6:50 AM | Reply
well it makes sense to me, it did all along.bingo!
[n/a] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 8-Jan-03/8:07 AM | Reply
Shit I feel really stupid, please explain the connection 'HOUSE' has with Sep11?
[10] cleverdevice @ 212.219.142.161 > Caducus | 9-Jan-03/2:38 AM | Reply
Its bingo! You know bingo right? It's everyones favourite game in Briitain, apprently. Can't say I've played it except in my russian class. 'Adin, tvee, shest, chetyre...' 'Bingo!!!!' 'Say it in Russian!' (Hanging head in shame) 'I can't remember'
[n/a] MuDvAyNe @ 213.122.159.38 > cleverdevice | 9-Jan-03/1:52 PM | Reply
no, its not bingo, ill tell u dumb people. Its someone sayin 9....11 with a pause (like bingo) bowing his head in remembrance of 9/11, or 11/9 in REAL date format, and someone completely spoiling the mood by shouting HOUSE.. GEDDIT YET???
[n/a] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 > MuDvAyNe | 13-Jan-03/3:37 AM | Reply
Yes thanks now i get it. I knew the 9...11 pause thing and knew house is a term in bingo but the mood spoiler I didn't get.

Nice one
[0] razorgrin @ 192.197.142.108 | 8-Jan-03/9:39 AM | Reply
um...riiight.
[8] RGallet @ 140.186.47.208 | 8-Jan-03/11:31 AM | Reply
ha ha. good one. 8
[7] brazen @ 68.128.248.239 | 9-Jan-03/12:14 AM | Reply
12:97:24:99
[10] Ranger @ 212.219.142.161 | 9-Jan-03/2:25 AM | Reply
Very clever, cunning, bingo too!
[10] cleverdevice @ 212.219.142.161 | 9-Jan-03/2:32 AM | Reply
Hahahaha! Yes!!! Oh yes!!!
[5] Shuushin @ 63.167.136.250 | 5-Oct-06/7:10 AM | Reply
me no comprenday.
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