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fade in (Free verse) by inka
colors fade the backround exists in dreams in real life called fantasy flowers wither and angels die the world the world in black and white people die and lose thier pride sugar melts majority lets evil rise serenity no longer exists mists of instability build to dense fogs of hopelessness will you be my sunshine take away the pain let me see the colors and the good lost in the rain let me fall asleep with you and life will start again in your arms i fall asleep and i can breathe again

Up the ladder: The world
Down the ladder: the realzz

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Arithmetic Mean: 5.75
Weighted score: 5.089402
Overall Rank: 6251
Posted: January 10, 2003 12:28 AM PST; Last modified: January 10, 2003 12:28 AM PST
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[7] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 10-Jan-03/2:38 AM | Reply
Pretty Good -7-
[6] <{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154 | 10-Jan-03/7:48 PM | Reply
i took all of your poems and squeezed them into one doghnut, sorry
i couldn't resist.
http://gangbox.com/mp3/shen%20ring.mp3
[10] DarkThirteens @ 24.18.137.238 | 24-Feb-04/8:02 PM | Reply
This is exelent! Definately work you should be proud of.
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