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The world (Free verse) by Sugarbbybuttrfly An endless pit of darkness and pain
A marathon race stopped by the rain
The sun never shine
The water never flows
And endless book of lines
The sadness only grows
The world
Up the ladder:
The Sadistic Mirth
Down the ladder:
fade in
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Posted: January 1, 2003 9:10 PM PST; Last modified: January 1, 2003 9:10 PM PSTWeighted score: 5.089402 Overall Rank: 6250 Comments:
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Caducus @ 62.105.88.10
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2-Jan-03/5:27 AM
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Not too bad but book should be replaced by endless lines that frown upon mankind, but its your baby, think you should play around with this it could be VERY good instead of well - good ! heres a 7
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