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fade in (Free verse) by inka

colors fade the backround exists in dreams in real life called fantasy flowers wither and angels die the world the world in black and white people die and lose thier pride sugar melts majority lets evil rise serenity no longer exists mists of instability build to dense fogs of hopelessness will you be my sunshine take away the pain let me see the colors and the good lost in the rain let me fall asleep with you and life will start again in your arms i fall asleep and i can breathe again

DarkThirteens 24-Feb-04/8:02 PM
This is exelent! Definately work you should be proud of.




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