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Free verse № 34990

heathen love

by w~* ATHENA *~w

Member since 2002 · Posted 9 Jan 2003 · 3 comments

I learned to fight, I learned to sin; I battled heathen, fought with lust; When you were on my side I'd win. My appetites I could not trust. I only knew your wrath was just. I loved you when no one did; Sought another chapter; Innocence as I was bid, Lives filled with laughter. White and red, black and blue True.

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[0] dmzoacan 9-Jan-03/11:41 PM Reply

suxor my coxor

[7] Caducus 10-Jan-03/2:38 AM Reply

Kicking piece

[0] dmzoacan 10-Jan-03/3:06 PM Reply

Plagiarized.