| Re: To You by Cha no Onna |
8-Jan-03/3:29 AM |
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Full of hostility and interesting to see your reflection on a tainted chapter in your past, I read this as no one has read it for a while and liked it -8-
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| Re: Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
8-Jan-03/2:46 AM |
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Ranger I liked the 1st draft too but this is equal to it heres the 8 vote i originally cast. I wanted to send you an e mail so I will display mine until the 12th Jan please send me it if you want, I may have something of interest for you.
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| Re: It Is About by Wulf |
7-Jan-03/9:07 AM |
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I have written a lot about death, and this my friend made the banshee of my soul shriek decibels hitting a few nerves along the way, you dont have to copyright work on here by the way -9-
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| Re: Frustration by DewDrop |
7-Jan-03/8:54 AM |
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Intelligently written, I must say the last stanza is the icing on a cake of frustration
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| Re: inside me by cherish |
7-Jan-03/8:49 AM |
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I was hoping for filth and got this purity ------huh ? its good though as ranger says it says a lot with so little -7-
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| Re: Shark by cleverdevice |
7-Jan-03/8:28 AM |
Send this to the Japs it might put them off their sharkfin soup, Thanks for enlightening me in the nature of Sharks.
(Thought this was about salesman) 7
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| Re: 6.387 seconds by INTRANSIT |
7-Jan-03/8:19 AM |
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Dramatic, and the ending....cool ! *8*
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| Re: Morning on Galapados by Mikius |
7-Jan-03/6:48 AM |
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1st class,, the opening stanza is original in description,(at least I think so) giving this a rare 9 and a 2nd read
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| Re: To the memory of Leonie Rysanek by vulcan |
7-Jan-03/6:46 AM |
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I rate this highly for its expressiveness and melodrama, its in the same vein as stuff tintagiles writes have an 8 well done
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| Re: The bouchon by Bachus |
7-Jan-03/6:44 AM |
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| Re: That feeling by trisha |
7-Jan-03/6:42 AM |
Hi trisha welcome to p/r. I found upon reading this that i was forced to empathize with you and I wanted to see this from a less generic and more personal point of view, try and engage the emotion you want to write about and express it in a more ethereal way.
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| Re: Solitude by Owner of the Sky |
6-Jan-03/7:56 AM |
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Descriptively acute and a good read -8-
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| Re: Sticks and Stones Farm, Pot Luck Thursday Nights by <~> |
6-Jan-03/6:47 AM |
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I like your style of writing, its so distinctive to you. 9
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| Re: A Man's Best Friend. by DewDrop |
6-Jan-03/4:58 AM |
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Ahhhh Mr Smooth welcome to poemranker I cant wait to see what you get for this fantastic piece of literature have an 8 for good luck
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| Re: Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
4-Jan-03/2:39 AM |
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| Re: Epistemology (2nd draft) by Ranger |
3-Jan-03/9:59 AM |
Rangers young for fucks sake but his work whatever you say has gotta Be respected, i couldnt write as a teen like this. I didnt understand all of this poemranker is not a hyperdermic shot of poetry some of it craves to be studied, votes can be postponed as intransit often does out of respect and i like that attitude, give the dude a break - hey ranger temporarily delete this do another version (if you can be arsed and compare the one you did for your palate and one for others) on 2nd thoughts go out tonight, seduce a woman, kick her out after, fill a pint glass full of bourbon and drink yourself in to a coma !
Is that a bad philosophy?
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| Re: Just clubbing fur seals by <{Baba^Yaga}> |
3-Jan-03/9:39 AM |
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I thought vilanelle as a holiday home in the Algarve, liked s1, s2 and the last stanzas but got lost in the middle, however I am having a very very very blonde day and my brain is in exile so dont listen to me =7=
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| Re: Caged by TxMstng02 |
3-Jan-03/9:28 AM |
just read that your only 18, I am 29 and have written poetry since I was 14, this is quite mature for your age. Keep choosing subjects that interest you, try to avoid forcing yourself to write.
Some good advice: accept constructive criticism from the users on this site, most are cool only a few are vacuous twats, there will be some users you will hate to begin with but they are the ones you will respect as most are honest, some very crafty, some will decimate your work, some wont, sometimes the vote system will confuse you, sometimes a top poet will give you a 10 and another top poet will give you a zero, its all about taste, pathos and whether you are respected. Try and be courteous by offering critique on other peoples work. Their are some hidden diamonds on this site and one day when we're all dead we'll be rich.
Good luck, now I'm off to lose another game of football
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| Re: Caged by TxMstng02 |
3-Jan-03/9:12 AM |
Like the subject, quite like the poem but how impressed I would be to read it completely from the animals perspective, now that would earn maximum points, I might have a go at it - see I'm inspired !
(Went to see the chimps once as a kid and they chuked their shit at everyone gawping at them, THATS POETIC JUSTICE ) good day sir heres a 6
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| Re: Fortune cookie by INTRANSIT |
3-Jan-03/9:08 AM |
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fanfuckingtastic, and appropriately tuned for YK03 resolutions.
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