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Solitude (Free verse) by Owner of the Sky
Waterchilde lies lightly resting
On moss covered oceanrocks;
She can hear Oz as he is calling
YellowRed voice deep and warm seeking
Like slumber caught between waking
And saltseashivering, missing wet embrace.
(while fieryflies and their ocean sisters are dancing)
On his lonely fire emerald earth throne
He licks fingers reverentcarefully
Tasting her on every fig devoured, ingested
And ultimately intimately anchored
To every ember fiber of his being.
He got lost on his way to Sanctum
Lead astray by seapaths crosscrossing
Spreading his heart everywhichway
Oh so very thin.
As he turns and tosses
Oz can hear her softly cajoling
Swimming freely within emerald daydreams,
Nestled in rain kisses melting
While the dewdrops are twilight fading.
(The earth is three fourths ocean, she owns you)
She falls into cold, redundant
Mirror shell contentment
With the goddess in a mud dress
Navigating cavernous secrets
Free from the grappling hooks.
Longing barely heavy, but spreading
Mist impossible to contain
They will find him like feathers floating freetwining
Leaving him doomed and drunk
On all the sunsets since the birth of time.
[ x. swim. away. while. you. are. winning. x.]
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Arithmetic Mean: 5.25
Weighted score: 5.029801
Overall Rank: 7253
Posted: January 5, 2003 12:03 PM PST; Last modified: January 5, 2003 12:03 PM PST
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