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The Dance (Part II) (Free verse) by purplestain Your arms are losing their grip on me
Why are you drifting away?
The song has only just begun
I am in a daze now
You came and you are going already
Hold me closer please
Don't let me go
You can't just leave me alone now
Has this dream just turned into a nightmare?
One that I will never get out of
I'm sliding off the moon
Bring me the sun
Please take me back to the start
Up the ladder:
Happiness
Down the ladder:
Solitude
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Posted: January 5, 2003 8:08 AM PST; Last modified: January 5, 2003 8:08 AM PSTWeighted score: 5.029801 Overall Rank: 7249 Comments:
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<{Baba^Yaga}> @ 24.126.113.154
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5-Jan-03/2:01 PM
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very pleasant. a good change of pace from the elitist trust fund trash poemranker attracts. have a 9.
...'cause I'm happy just to dance with you...
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