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The Dance (Part II) (Free verse) by purplestain

Your arms are losing their grip on me Why are you drifting away? The song has only just begun I am in a daze now You came and you are going already Hold me closer please Don't let me go You can't just leave me alone now Has this dream just turned into a nightmare? One that I will never get out of I'm sliding off the moon Bring me the sun Please take me back to the start

<{Baba^Yaga}> 5-Jan-03/2:01 PM
very pleasant. a good change of pace from the elitist trust fund trash poemranker attracts. have a 9.




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