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It Is About (Free verse) by Wulf
It is about tomorrow, all the tomorrow moments we will live without you. You are there all the more because you are gone. It is about forgiving... you, for shocking the peace of our living, taking yourself from us, for not understanding how very much we needed... you. It is about your pain, the pieces, apart from our sharing, the path your sweet steps would follow. It is about our guilt, our inability to comprehend your depth, the closed walls you had made, the doors we never heard closing. It is about goodbye, the salt in the tear on your cheek, the soft breath of your living, no waving hand, no parting kiss, just goodbye. It is about acceptance; what you were is what we are. And what you will always be, the good love and times we shared. It is about you, Child. copyright 2003 Thomas Paul {WORDWULF} SternerHowe

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.571429
Weighted score: 5.6915636
Overall Rank: 1964
Posted: January 6, 2003 8:21 PM PST; Last modified: January 6, 2003 8:21 PM PST
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Comments:
[9] Ranger @ 212.219.142.161 | 7-Jan-03/1:10 AM | Reply
This is very nice, it really got to me...beautiful and sad, very sweet. 9
[10] Bachus @ 24.126.113.154 | 7-Jan-03/1:42 AM | Reply
Phoenix.
[9] Caducus @ 62.105.88.10 | 7-Jan-03/9:07 AM | Reply
I have written a lot about death, and this my friend made the banshee of my soul shriek decibels hitting a few nerves along the way, you dont have to copyright work on here by the way -9-
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