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Refulgent (Free verse) by INTRANSIT
Deep in the southern hemisphere a lighthouse, clutching earth touches space. Its Fresnal lenses have fallen away and the strobe hangles with a million candela splintering the universe.

Up the ladder: It Is About
Down the ladder: The Well

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Arithmetic Mean: 7.571429
Weighted score: 5.6915636
Overall Rank: 1965
Posted: June 18, 2003 7:16 AM PDT; Last modified: June 18, 2003 8:00 AM PDT
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[9] horus8 @ 24.126.113.154 | 18-Jun-03/10:13 AM | Reply
http://www.garageband.com/genre/raprock

I'm at the bottom of the page, laughing.
[7] willknots_chick @ 64.165.68.197 | 18-Jun-03/11:38 AM | Reply
yeah...ok
[n/a] INTRANSIT @ 64.12.96.139 > willknots_chick | 18-Jun-03/2:07 PM | Reply
Pinkie could kick your ass. and he's only got 3 years on ya.
[9] Jill Stockinger @ 0:0:0:0:0:0:0:1 | 29-Dec-20/4:04 PM | Reply
Lovely use of the word hangles (to hang from a hook...)
I would remove the comma between lighthouse and clutching- no comma needed. Beautiful poem. Really well done.
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